Abstract Notions

With a resonating effect his warm breath breathes me in Within his gentle vibrations and unwavering discipline Treats me as a goddess taking note of my equations Loving my lines never deviating from my smooth variations Inspiring my creativity allowing my determined mission Leaving apprehensions to be lost in perfect condition Flowing with my curves caressing my contours Abstract notions becoming lifelike and obscure Protecting our heavens celestial lights from above Experiencing every emotion in the name of love
10/24/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Fleming Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 3:15 PM
I think (actually I know it) some of your very best poetry derives or stems directly from "Rap". And why not? I can fully understand how you have been influenced through life experiences to, at times, write just so. You really are uncannily good at it, Brenda...and I sincerely mean that...I really do. Another great write -- and congratulations on yet another win! Keep rapping away B.C.Rapper...keep rapping away. With affection. :) john
Chiri Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 3:37 PM
Hahaha! John you are so silly! Thank you once again my friend! All my affection!;)
Carber Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 6:16 AM
Lovely! Congrats Brenda
Chiri Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 4:29 PM
L J thank you so much!:)
Canerdy Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Vividly descriptive WINNING poem, Brenda. Janice
Chiri Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Thank you Janice your piece was amazing too! Congrats!:)
Edmonds  Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Sensual and beautiful notions Brenda, congratulations on a well earned win. .~ Belle
Chiri Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 7:05 PM
Belle thank you!:)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Beautifully inspiring and inspirational... verse of love that lasts. God bless you
Chiri Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 7:04 PM
Regina thank you so much!:)
One Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 5:16 AM
Lovely lines of committed love and romance...
Chiri Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 7:04 PM
Thank you S1!:)
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