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With a resonating effect his warm breath breathes me in Within his gentle vibrations and unwavering discipline Treats me as a goddess taking note of my equations Loving my lines never deviating from my smooth variations Inspiring my creativity allowing my determined mission Leaving apprehensions to be lost in perfect condition Flowing with my curves caressing my contours Abstract notions becoming lifelike and obscure Protecting our heavens celestial lights from above Experiencing every emotion in the name of love
10/24/2020

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Date: 11/14/2020 3:15:00 PM
I think (actually I know it) some of your very best poetry derives or stems directly from "Rap". And why not? I can fully understand how you have been influenced through life experiences to, at times, write just so. You really are uncannily good at it, Brenda...and I sincerely mean that...I really do. Another great write -- and congratulations on yet another win! Keep rapping away B.C.Rapper...keep rapping away. With affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/14/2020 3:37:00 PM
Hahaha! John you are so silly! Thank you once again my friend! All my affection!;)
Date: 10/27/2020 11:55:00 PM
Sensual and romantic, this poem drew me in. Good read to the very end. Congratulations on your win, Brenda!
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Date: 10/26/2020 6:16:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2020 4:29:00 PM
L J thank you so much!:)
Date: 10/25/2020 8:46:00 PM
Vividly descriptive WINNING poem, Brenda. Janice
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2020 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Janice your piece was amazing too! Congrats!:)
Date: 10/25/2020 1:40:00 PM
Sensual and beautiful notions Brenda, congratulations on a well earned win. .~ Belle
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/25/2020 7:05:00 PM
Belle thank you!:)
Date: 10/25/2020 5:36:00 AM
Beautifully inspiring and inspirational... verse of love that lasts. God bless you
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/25/2020 7:04:00 PM
Regina thank you so much!:)
Date: 10/25/2020 5:16:00 AM
Lovely lines of committed love and romance...
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/25/2020 7:04:00 PM
Thank you S1!:)

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