Absorbed Goodbye

absorb my tears oh river of life carry them to oceans by and by to every sweet creature let them drink and allow this weary soul to sink my eyes grow ever anxious to pour relief and reverie to your silent shore may living waters carry forth my pain streams rising in steams to bring forth rain thunderous forces repel on the rivers lightnings bear the earth that quivers no shelter i need—no let me bleed cut me open as tears willfully proceed alas the eyes can bear no warmth ripped open dry from the wanted storm i needed them to be absorbed i wanted them to dismember abhorred dispel my ache oh treacherous death let me lie inside your parched caress to every fossil deprived of life rub me dry in absorbed goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/1/2013 5:52:00 PM
Dear Laura, YOUR words so touch the taste buds of the palate.The flow of YOUR verses carry such wisdom A Magical Mastery of Laureatus Words Superb Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 4/2/2012 3:14:00 PM
There is an absolute treasure trove of well-penned verses among your work, dear lady. This just became another personal favorite for its emotional rythm and compelling sentiment. - Chuck
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Date: 12/26/2011 4:04:00 AM
life can be a trying place, where walk we tearful , no solace, be you happy in yourself, spring down quickly from the shelf, and life will find your place, love will interface... sometime...someplace...
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Date: 12/25/2011 9:50:00 PM
My voicebox was bludgeoned to death by this poem - Kyle
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