Absolute Truth 8x8

I’ve heard it said life’s a river
With bends, rocky shallows and dams,
And love not gifts but the giver,
Don’t be a lion, but a lamb.

An apple a day is the cure,
And happiness comes from within.
Of one thing I’m totally sure
I much prefer vodka to gin!

8x8 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: PS Awtry
November 10, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Brewer Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 9:30 PM
A choice with no half measures! I love your no nonsense realism expressed with wit and humour. Well written, Cindi
Gauthier Avatar
November 16, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Back with more congrats, Cindi.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Me too, screwdrivers are a delight once in a while. I enjoyed your entry very much Cindi. Congratulations on your HM. : )
Messina Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Great poem, with a terrific ending...Congratulations on your win Cindi...Charlie
Smith Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Congrats Cindi, much enjoyed. :)
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Oh the ending sure made me smile Cindi! Many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
Awtry Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Cindi, I so enjoyed your poem. Thank you for entering the contest. Congratulations :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Congrats on your well deserved honors, Cindi.
Blown Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 9:55 PM
very inspirational...life's but a river through a curved space
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