Absent Minds
Working past with words of flaw,
winding world and shielding thoughts;
dreaming across the points of low,
wondering minds next where to go?
If we act like we don’t care,
absent minded and one take stare,
bagged eyes thinking hard or just A fooling layer;
There is no take on what is rare?
Meanings given to what is just put there
how actions need to be more worthy to mean?
Your presence cant be felt there
up where your conscious yet hasn’t reached.
The world stays high here
where awareness has no issues;
The body in which your soul resides
is where your mind lies bare.
Empty Empty Empty in here
where I am hesitant to go,
In here is the world of Christ
in here I tend to bow;
In here in here is the signs of an evil
in here is from where I have rose.
It stays rigid with what I have grown
It keeps coming way back and forth…
Challenges and what`s my opinion,
goes together to the growth I could know.
Still Deep rooted and deeper is stored what In here is Raw.
Working past with words of flaw
winding world and shielding thoughts
dreaming across the points of low
wondering minds next where to go?
I don't know weather its deserving or not . But each time I read it ,it gives me answers to many of my anxieties and the first and last four lines are what is conveyed in each verse in the middle broadly. First line speaks what we have done already in the past ,something that we are guilty of and how we work our past out .
Second line depicts living in this world with our identity yet shaping it accordingly. A dilemma we carry to hold on ourselves confident or grow with change.
Third line is about the frustrations we carry with sorting things out and procrastinating things just not there. When we fall apart like destroyed homes.
Last line indicates hope ,conviction of our mind ,finding THE thing which can carry us our hopes ,indicating our mind is not stagnant and always finds possibility.
Copyright © Sonali Thakur | Year Posted 2019
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