Absent Fathers

With no guidance—love— or compliments from you  
it is no wonder — why — she fell in love with men she never knew...                                                           

you never gave her one                   
which is why she didn't have a clue... 

trying to fill a void much like pouring liquid through a sifter  
attracted to spirits like yours — selfish drifters...

like you— they were soon three sheets in the wind                  
my God — will she ever learn how to choose better men?...  

you made promises that you never kept                         
caused her to wear sadness like a waist belt— and oh my God how she wept...

she just couldn't figure out that it was not her — but you                            
she wore blame as deep as the sky is blue... 

absent daddy don't you know that as a FATHER — you are —THE— most IMPORTANT MAN in her life?     

but as a sperm donor — you set your baby-girl up for strife...



Inspired by the album "Words"..song titled; "Like a Woman" 
by The Tony Rich Project"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/26/2024 8:03:00 PM
Hey, phyl. This is so such a lovely poem. I felt every string and I hope we learn to forgive ourselves one day. They never know the extent of their absence in our lives. Cheers.
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Date: 6/27/2024 9:34:00 AM
Hi Tonye.... Thanks so much for taking the time to comment... It’s comments such as yours that fuel my passion for creating poetry relating to real life subjects... Wishing you all the best!
Date: 10/5/2020 8:50:00 AM
Your poem pulled on my heart strings. I felt as though you were writing this poem about me- Keep writing-
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Date: 10/5/2020 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Gwendolyn for taking the time to share. There are so many who can relate, sad but true... I invite you to check out my book; Wasted Pearls: Haunting Echoes, available at amazon... A compelling, inspirational memoir.
Date: 4/23/2016 2:02:00 PM
Thanks for commenting James....
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