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Absence Makes the Heart

Your absence hurts me,
Like a persistent toothache
Or a pair of too-tight shoes.
But, worse, your hard face,
When finally we meet,
Leaves me panicked, gasping:
A doomed and thrashing swimmer,
Drowning in your indifference.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Stinson Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 9:40 PM
A strong start and an even stronger finish; between the idea and the reality, as T.S. Eliot said, falls the shadow. Great penning!
Price Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 2:01 PM
I love your style of writing... The phrases you use to express yourself... Lovely.
Wesley Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 9:19 AM
Much sadness in this verse but expressed well
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