Absence

*so I'm unsure if this is even a poem. I believe I originally wrote this as a song.
I realize the majority of what i post is full heartbroken lines and sadistic sayings.

When i look in the mirror
I see the pitiful creature I've become
Every memory laced with the thought of you
Are you aware of what you've done to me?
do you know what it's like to feel alone?

Your abscene is my downfall
Darling, I'm falling far!
You were my one and only
You were my everything!

Tears roll down my face
Everytime I hear your name
You've torn me to shreds and
I can't be put back together, Never again.

Your abscene is my downfall
Darling, I'm falling far!
You were my one and only
You were my everything!

I'm falling, I'm calling.
I'm falling, I'm calling.

Your abscene is my downfall
Darling, I'm falling far!
You were my one and only
You were my everything!

My everything
Now, I have nothing...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 9, 2010 at 9:04 PM
it would make a beautifully sad song. put it to some music for me please. keep writing------Ell
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