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Absence

*so I'm unsure if this is even a poem. I believe I originally wrote this as a song. I realize the majority of what i post is full heartbroken lines and sadistic sayings. When i look in the mirror I see the pitiful creature I've become Every memory laced with the thought of you Are you aware of what you've done to me? do you know what it's like to feel alone? Your abscene is my downfall Darling, I'm falling far! You were my one and only You were my everything! Tears roll down my face Everytime I hear your name You've torn me to shreds and I can't be put back together, Never again. Your abscene is my downfall Darling, I'm falling far! You were my one and only You were my everything! I'm falling, I'm calling. I'm falling, I'm calling. Your abscene is my downfall Darling, I'm falling far! You were my one and only You were my everything! My everything Now, I have nothing...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/9/2010 9:04:00 PM
it would make a beautifully sad song. put it to some music for me please. keep writing------Ell
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