Absence
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OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'
lyrical times
forgotten
absences now
remembered
days pass
of
times past
days
glide by
so slow
this life in the
shadows
a bleak future
lies ahead
in
an empty
wasteland
of cold years
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2023
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