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Absence

So sad; she stands on sandy shore Her love, it sailed so, out to sea Upon the waves, under the moon She smells his being, there on the breeze As heart then drops, it struggles long She falls, to wait, upon her knees For he set sail one summer day With promise to one day return A year had passed, no word from him And so her heart, it still there yearns She gives not up, her one true love As deep inside her love still burns A night, a night, she prays he shows As then her smile will find her face Until that night, she continues long For deep inside, no love replace She prays for his most safe return Each night she waits for their embrace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/24/2008 1:30:00 PM
I love the sea. Beautifully written. A touch of sadness and pain - waiting for a lost love. An excellent write. Love reading your poems. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/24/2008 10:01:00 AM
Wow, very beautifully written! I love the sea and your images speak volumes. I could almost smell the salty sea air!:) Regards, Sara
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Date: 7/24/2008 8:16:00 AM
A most beautiful write! It was as if I, myself was standing on that shore. Sure tugs at the heart! Great job as always! :) -Alana
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Date: 7/24/2008 6:47:00 AM
Darn sailors! I liked this as an old sailor that did eventually return, bu my heart still goes out to sea now and then. Vince
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Date: 7/22/2008 6:07:00 AM
The imagery of the sea is always moving. Combined with the sadness of your poem, this makes for quite an emotional and haunting write. Very beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/21/2008 5:51:00 PM
Beautiful and sad - with a dash of hope - wonderful poem
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Date: 7/21/2008 5:01:00 PM
Michael great heartfelt write the sea is a lonely place ! Laura :)
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Date: 7/21/2008 4:52:00 PM
Hi Michael Ahhh,so sad but beautifully written. A heartfelt story that touches one's heart deeply. Loved and Enjoyed very much hun!A poetic song... Blessings to you and your family. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/21/2008 2:13:00 PM
Nice poem about the love for a seaman. Reminds me of the pop song"Brandy" in the 1970's which had a similar theme. Nice to have someone waiting for you! Keep up the good work.
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Date: 7/21/2008 1:20:00 PM
Crazy, I JUST wrote a ballade very similar to this premise, girl waits for love at sea...I'll post it tomorrow...great minds, right? lol LOVED this woesome tale. Kristin
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Date: 7/21/2008 11:40:00 AM
wow your good I really enjoyed that
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