Abracadabra Day

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Poetic Form: Rhyme

Inspired: 2024 July 21

Image: Abracadabra City Park

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Forget-me-nots share sighs of For-Heaven-sake's, from boulevards to avenues, the streets -- speak. City park use strengthens, as the day lengthens. Doves charming swarms of drakes, tethering the lakes, while the awesome vision enlightened the crowds, frequent strolls beneath middays consoling breaks. Wandering drifts of cloud-swept vistas abroad. Smooth gushing sounds that the family film takes of the small falls that meanders down the creek. As the day lengthens, city park use strengthens. Silence climbs, Forget-me-not steads mid handshakes.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/23/2024 6:39:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, educating me about Central Park. God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/23/2024 10:12:00 AM

Beata, you are wonderful blessing indeed, Aloha William

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/15/2024 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations Hilo Poet! Your beautiful, relaxing poem earned you a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud of your placement. Many good poems were submitted, and still, your poem rose to the top ten. Well done, my friend Emile.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/15/2024 2:44:00 PM

...and therefore, with a heartfelt thanks, Aloha William

Jay Narain

Date: 7/22/2024 11:23:00 AM

Nice poem. Wandering in the park and adoring flowers is such a charm.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/22/2024 12:06:00 PM

Unfortunately, my contracted time there was busily brief, and with that circumstance, I did not have such an opportunity for a visit, even though it was across street where I worked, thank you Jay. Aloha William

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2024 4:14:00 PM

Aloha! Hilo Poet, I like this poem. I can vision the people in the park. they are among the forget Me nots. aloha! /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2024 2:43:00 PM

Aloha! William,I know I would not walk there by myself. I would feel safer with some one walking with me. Aloha! /CDarlene/

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/22/2024 12:12:00 PM

Only if you walk in the shadows, sometimes even with someone--may not suffice, perhaps your share is a good advice, Darlene. Aloha William

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2024 10:20:00 AM

Aloha! Central park must be very popular. i heard that it is dangerous to walk there at night alone. Aloha! /Darlene/

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/21/2024 4:49:00 PM

Yes, Darlene, this is Central Park in New York City midtown Manhattan near 5th Avenue where I worked at The Plaza for a while, years ago, it's the city's creme de le creme. Aloha William