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Above Us

free floating clouds pass
calm canvas, an abstract sky
rhythmic white brushstrokes












Haiku composed August 6/21

skysummerhaiku

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Gary Radice

December 19, 2021 at 7:24 AM

You've used a wonderful pallet of words.

Brian Sambourne

December 19, 2021 at 8:28 AM

I appreciate the affirmative comment Gary. Hope that you are well. Cheers, Brian

Harry Horsman

August 23, 2021 at 11:28 PM

LOve the canvas sky.

Brian Sambourne

August 24, 2021 at 6:38 AM

Thank you, Harry for reading my postings + leaving a note. Be well. Brian

Line Gauthier

August 12, 2021 at 9:02 AM

Beautiful imagery, Brian ~ congrats

Brian Sambourne

August 12, 2021 at 10:32 AM

Thank you, Line, for your stop by + congratulatory note. Be well. Brian

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2021 at 11:14 AM

gorgeous images! Congrats in the contest

Brian Sambourne

August 7, 2021 at 3:08 PM

Thank you Andrea. Very supportive of you to comment. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick

August 7, 2021 at 10:54 AM

Ahh!! To float on one of those clouds above earth's problems, but alas, we have to settle for being earth bound until. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Brian Sambourne

August 7, 2021 at 3:10 PM

You are right, Sara. There is something seductive about puffed clouds drifting by. Thank you for the drop by + comment. Be well. Brian

Kim Merryman

August 7, 2021 at 9:01 AM

Bryan, I love your picturesque haiku! Beautiful! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne

August 7, 2021 at 5:39 PM

Thank you, Kim. Your encouraging remarks are sincerely appreciated. Best wishes, Brian

Sam Kauffman

August 7, 2021 at 8:54 AM

What a beautiful picture your "brush strokes" of words paint Brian. Summer clouds are both amazing and so much fun to gaze at from a hammock or lying in the cool grass. Such a deliughtful summer afternoon pastime! Congratulations and high fives for your win! ATB

Brian Sambourne

August 7, 2021 at 8:59 AM

Thanks very much Sam, for your uplifting remarks. Haikus are certainly a challenge to say much in just a few words. Your drop by is always appreciated. Best wishes, Brian