David William Breidenthal Poet Lyric

Above

We should be like the quail in the desert sea
We should be happier than a honey bee at ease
We should be as joyful as a June bug, so free
We shouldn't talk behind each other's backs please

Adore us, for we are perfect in Your image
Belong once more, for we are not water under the bridge
Over the rainbow, we will be as one with Him
Very awesome that we're two peas in a pod -
Elegance will be our dance in a whim, in a whim

Engulfed in utter humility, for we believe in God
Vitality is key - just look up to He
Old sayings mean so much to us, but we are not in vain
Butterflies soar beautifully - we must have glee
Allow us to be made in unity...God will see us through our Pain

We should be telling the truth behind the lies
We should be accepting one another honestly
We should be yelling out our hellos and goodbyes
We shouldn't walk separately...we walk together preciously

Adore us, for we are perfect in Your image
Belong once more, for we are not water under the bridge
Over the rainbow, we will be as one with Him
Very awesome that we're two peas in a pod -
Elegance will be our dance in a whim, in a whim

Engulfed in utter humility, for we believe in God
Vitality is key - just look up to He
Old sayings mean so much to us, but we are not in vain
Butterflies soar beautifully - we must have glee
Allow us to be made in unity...God will see us through our Pain

We should be like the falcons in the blessed air
We should be hopeful as a beautiful dove without a care
We should be full of delight and share our love
We shouldn't take anyone for granite, but look towards Above

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Connie Marcum Wong April 9, 2020 at 5:21 PM Very lovely especially as Easter approaches. Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored as POTD J.W. Happy Easter! xxoo David William Breidenthal April 9, 2020 at 6:20 PM Thank you so much :) I don’t celebrate Easter but Passover, but I hope you have a fine and lovely Easter ~ thank you in advance :)

Jan Allison April 9, 2020 at 4:18 AM what an inspirational poem David! Belated congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx David William Breidenthal April 9, 2020 at 4:12 PM Thank you Jan! :) xo

Jc Hawkens April 8, 2020 at 8:15 PM Congratulations on POTD. And a wonderful inspirational poem. JC Hawkens David William Breidenthal April 9, 2020 at 2:22 AM Thank you so much!

Brandy Nicole April 8, 2020 at 7:04 PM We should "Want to" embrace all things that are good. Be kind to each other. Let our lights shine. Your thoughts lift me up. Take my heart to the sky. Congratulations J.W. on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy David William Breidenthal April 9, 2020 at 2:22 AM True that! Thanks for your lovely comment on my lyric tonight :)

Eve Roper April 8, 2020 at 6:46 PM Great inspirational prayer, JW, congratulations on POTD David William Breidenthal April 9, 2020 at 2:23 AM Thanks! :)

Arturo Michael April 8, 2020 at 4:28 PM A good heart shines on this write...Congratulations J.W. on POTD David William Breidenthal April 8, 2020 at 5:38 PM Thank you!!! I appreciate your comment on my lyric today~

Paula Goldsmith April 8, 2020 at 12:51 PM Congratulations on your POTD win. I love where you say, "We should be full of delight and share our love We shouldn't take anyone for granite, but look towards Above." So true. Enjoy your win and day........ David William Breidenthal April 8, 2020 at 5:39 PM Thank you! I really like those lines as well! :) I enjoyed writing this poem/lyric.

Sam Kauffman April 8, 2020 at 11:14 AM Lovely imagery and cadence. Congratulations on your POTD David William Breidenthal April 8, 2020 at 5:40 PM Thank you very much!

Sandra Adams April 8, 2020 at 9:38 AM wonderfully stated JW.... congratulations on your potd honors David William Breidenthal April 8, 2020 at 5:40 PM Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2020 at 7:13 AM - Truth and lovely written ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. J.W. ... stay well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) David William Breidenthal April 8, 2020 at 5:41 PM Thank you! Stay well too! :)

Winged Warrior April 8, 2020 at 5:23 AM Superb spiritual write my friend...Congrats!! on POTD!! J.W.E...stay safe...the Wingster :o) David William Breidenthal April 8, 2020 at 5:41 PM Thanks a bill! Stay safe too :-)

Tom Cunningham April 8, 2020 at 3:49 AM Amen J. W, He offers light in this darkness that has enveloped us. Congrats on POTD honours. Tom David William Breidenthal April 8, 2020 at 5:42 PM Very true! Thanks !