About You

You make my mind go in circles, my body gets restless without you, all I think is about you. I try to look for ways to keep my thoughts away, but I find no reason to shut my mind off you. all I think is about you. Your absence has filled my heart with darkness, only you are the sunshine to that emptiness I feel in me, all I think is about you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Goudreau Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 7:14 AM
Wow, very moving read. I could feel your emotions run through the page. Very well crafted. A pleasure reading you and thank you for dropping by my page. Hugs..
Durrani Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Thank you so much Suzanne, I really appreciate your views about my emotions put in my words I have for someone I love deeply.
Wesley Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 7:01 PM
How wonderful to have someone you feel that close to.Love the emotion inthis one.
Durrani Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 3:51 PM
It really is Elizabeth, when you really feel that special to someone who understands you It does change alot. thanks for your thoughts.
Chakrapany Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 10:10 AM
heart touching romance poem .thank you for sharing .jk
Durrani Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Thank you so much for you kind thoughts.....
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 12:42 PM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Saleem. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
Durrani Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 12:49 PM
Thanks Carol.... trying my best.
Palmer Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 12:14 PM
love bro conquer the mind and capture the heart of men,great write Saleem
Durrani Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Richard, its been a while. trying to come back from all that I have lost. Again it starts just hoping it goes well......
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