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You make my mind go in circles, my body gets restless without you, all I think is about you. I try to look for ways to keep my thoughts away, but I find no reason to shut my mind off you. all I think is about you. Your absence has filled my heart with darkness, only you are the sunshine to that emptiness I feel in me, all I think is about you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/19/2012 7:14:00 AM
Wow, very moving read. I could feel your emotions run through the page. Very well crafted. A pleasure reading you and thank you for dropping by my page. Hugs..
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Saleem Durrani
Date: 9/20/2012 3:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Suzanne, I really appreciate your views about my emotions put in my words I have for someone I love deeply.
Date: 8/31/2012 7:01:00 PM
How wonderful to have someone you feel that close to.Love the emotion inthis one.
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Saleem Durrani
Date: 9/20/2012 3:51:00 PM
It really is Elizabeth, when you really feel that special to someone who understands you It does change alot. thanks for your thoughts.
Date: 7/16/2012 10:10:00 AM
heart touching romance poem .thank you for sharing .jk
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Saleem Durrani
Date: 9/20/2012 3:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for you kind thoughts.....
Date: 7/12/2012 12:42:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Saleem. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
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Saleem Durrani
Date: 7/12/2012 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Carol.... trying my best.
Date: 7/12/2012 12:14:00 PM
love bro conquer the mind and capture the heart of men,great write Saleem
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Saleem Durrani
Date: 7/12/2012 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Richard, its been a while. trying to come back from all that I have lost. Again it starts just hoping it goes well......

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