About You

I wonder if you feel the same way i do when i look at you

Sometimes i think you see it just don't know if its true

Its weird that out friendship can be this close,

And  yet we haven't even taken a toast

I raise my hand and you know what to do

If i make a comment you know just what to do

Its like we are connected somehow or maybe we met before in another life

I just know i want you and I'm not thinking  of being your wife

I just want to hold you maybe if its just for one night

Maybe then you will know how it feels to be treated just right

Its funny how you can feel this crazy for just one person alone

 I'm not used to it yet so lets just talk on the phone

Not sure where this will lead us but I'm ready for the ride

Just promise that if you plan on rolling somewhere else you will at least let me slide

Its not too complicated, just to give me a try

You look like your scared but i promise i wont lie

I mean why would i?, ill be lucky just to kiss you

And maybe if i make it right you will fall like some tissue

Lets get to the point, sit back and take off your shoes

Because tonight ill have to make sure that its me you chose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/2/2011 2:12:00 AM
Well Penned Jacqueline.. Thanks for Sharing !!!!!!!
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