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I woke up this morning I couldn't see your face I felt so lost I Felt out of place when we are around each other we're so close I can't believe how lucky I am that you love me the most when I see your body I begin to fant it reminds me of a sant when I see your face it takes me to our happy place!!!!!!

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Date: 9/28/2008 5:34:00 AM
very full of love! Written from the heart, which is how poems are supposed to be! Good job to you...
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Date: 9/27/2008 10:19:00 PM
Tracie this is very beautiful - on the forth line from the bottom is the last word supposed to be faint instead of fant - other than that typo I really liked this poem - God Bless
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