About You

I woke up this morning
I couldn't see your face 
I felt so lost I Felt out
of place when we are 
around each other we're
so close I can't believe how
lucky I am that you love
me the most when I see
your body I begin to fant
it reminds me of a sant when
I see your face it takes me
to our happy place!!!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Anos Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 5:34 AM
very full of love! Written from the heart, which is how poems are supposed to be! Good job to you...
Jordan Avatar
September 27, 2008 at 10:19 PM
Tracie this is very beautiful - on the forth line from the bottom is the last word supposed to be faint instead of fant - other than that typo I really liked this poem - God Bless
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