Notes About The Poem
For: IN HONOR OF AN ODE Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
October 15, 2025

About the Last Train

The majestic train arrives~
It's strong, much stronger than I,
beautiful in its gleaming
reflections of the station's 
night lights, perhaps it will share
its strength with me as I trust
it to rescue me at last.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 5:59 PM
wow, a unique take on the prompt and a magnificently written poem....best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, Sara
Achara Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 6:23 PM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 2:47 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "About the Last Train" write with a great picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Achara Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 6:23 PM
Thank you. Good luck to you too.
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