About That Time

We become critical
analytical,
what we need is 
something magical

the hunter in me hunts within me
while the gatherer prepares
the feast.

One coin
with two sides
but
we always seem to be
on the edge,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 6:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Horsman Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 2:43 AM
Clever poetry, excellent read
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