About Mom (Title Doesn'T Matter)

Your favorite shade
Encompassing my pupils
Gone from blue to gray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 3:52 AM
Interesting Haiku. Sara
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July 1, 2009 at 9:11 AM
A lost for the reader to think about in this concise poem. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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June 25, 2009 at 1:15 PM
I love this poem Johnny, a beautiful beautiful write, hope to read more soon.. Take care and thankyou for your comments on my poem, love Jo
Brown Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Johnny. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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