Sotto Poet Poet Verse

Abnormal Assessment

Shared standings and beguiling beginners
Brobdingnagian breeding and brutal babies
False fellows and flumadiddle flair
Well-attended wedding with subpar sageness
Cash corrosive customs control
Plagued positions and phony persona
whimsical world pious properly pegged

Written: April 30, 2023

Alliterisen Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May


Line  1 -   x  = 10
Line 2 -  10+2 = 12
Line 3 -  10-1 = 9
Line 4 - (10+2 )-1 = 11
Line 5 - 10-2 = 8
Line 6 -  (10+2)-2 = 10
Line 7 =  10

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Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2023 at 1:04 PM congrats for your win, Sotto

Joseph May May 29, 2023 at 9:42 AM Congrats on your win Sotto, Very nicely penned Sotto Poet May 29, 2023 at 10:48 AM Thank you so much, Joseph. Appreciate you reading, placing, and commenting on my poem. I'm honored.

Yann Rolland May 1, 2023 at 2:20 PM i didn't get it all, but the aliteraions are very enjoyable, good luck for the contest yann

Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2023 at 11:34 AM - Have considered this contest ... looks difficult ... it turned into a Tanka :))) - You have a wonderful contribution ... best wishes in the contest, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick May 1, 2023 at 9:44 AM Reads like a very complicated work with some excellent vocabulary within. It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit May 1, 2023 at 5:54 AM WOW! Not easy to write this form, but you have managed to deliver your message with alliteration in every line. Best to you my friend.