Abendsonne/ Evening Sun/ El Sol De La Tarde

Ein letztes Leuchten 
Abendsonne über der Stadt
Wie goldenes Laub

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A last gleam
Evening sun over the town
Like golden foliage

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Un último destello
Sol de la tarde sobre la ciudad
Como follaje de oro

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/16/2010 6:04:00 AM
I like to read a poem and do not equivocate, you write such a poem ... what exquisite images you paint.
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:56:00 AM
These beautiful pictures you paint mentally for us are always awesome...the rich tones of autumn leaves and the various hues of the setting sun is just breathless to us nature lovers, Gert!! Love, Audrey.
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:02:00 AM
beautiful haiku!
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Date: 11/4/2010 10:52:00 PM
Golden foilage. BEautiful!
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Date: 11/4/2010 8:14:00 AM
What a beautiful image that of the sunset. You paint lovely images in my mind:) Hugs, Emilia:)
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Date: 11/1/2010 5:37:00 PM
Forgive me, Gert, but you triggered thoughts of fishing. Just as that "last gleam" is sinking below the horizon, the fish start biting. Very beautiful image of the town and foliage in the background, but for me the fish are in the forefront. The German version has a very melodious quality to it as well. Excellent! (And thanks for reminding me that sundown is primetime for fishing.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/31/2010 9:38:00 AM
Gert what beautiful imagery ;) hope your Sunday's been a blessed one. Really enjoyed your haiku ~
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Date: 10/30/2010 2:13:00 PM
Very nice imagery in this well written Haiku, Gert! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Alles Gute! Caroline.
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Date: 10/30/2010 2:12:00 PM
Always execellent gems you share with us, Gert! Beautiful view even at this distance and place where the sun is yet, still high in the sky!! Goes to my favorites.. Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/30/2010 9:42:00 AM
how wonderful indeed to be inspired by the view that you saw as you went home :) you take care and thank you for your inspiring comments Gert :)
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Date: 10/30/2010 9:36:00 AM
bravo my friend such outstanding work keep writing please your to good to stop
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Date: 10/30/2010 9:27:00 AM
I love that, "evening sun" --wonderful imagery captured in these three lines, Gert! Enjoyed the comparison of the sun to leaves :) Hope you are having a great day :) -- nikko :)
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