Abba Father a Breath Away Your Doors

Their malnurished soiled child, setting aside time's stream
Somber the baby's eyes; waiting for a dream ? Seasons come
Years going by his pale rider passing everyday upon the otherside
Black and white there are no dimensions just, mutilating life madrigal
It's anguished notes draped her caskets immolate, reticent wails touching
Truth's monolithic bier this requiem ever tolling such bells innate's, maltese cross....
Creation's creature as a newborn in awe; intrigued by love's infant while together they walk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dylan Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Jeremy I don't know what to say my friend.. this si so deep and wow oh wow... just a door away my friend is the hurt and pain, the other door could it be love, please tell me dear kind sir.. Creations creature as a newborn in awe... awesome writing... Brooke
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May 11, 2014 at 12:04 PM
It's love and nothing else. Very strong and nice creation. Loved always, my friend, bl
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