Abandonment

Father never there he died far away from her she broken dancer

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/5/2008 9:49:00 AM

Poignant and terribly sad... your words convey her grief so vividly. Well done Sue! Best wishes, Keith

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/13/2008 6:54:00 PM

Pray for the father who missed seeing his little girl grow up. Touching write. Vince

Date: 11/13/2008 4:29:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Yes, there are so many broken lives due to broken families. Much said in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

Deneen White

Date: 11/8/2008 5:23:00 PM

I know what it feels like to feel abandoned by a father, mine did the same thing, and several times I have tried to reach out to him, all to no avail, great heart-wrenching write, take care D-nyce

Michael Torres

Date: 11/6/2008 2:07:00 PM

Sad Sue. kThis is so gripping and true. I hope you have total closer if its true. God bless you MichaelTorres.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/3/2008 3:42:00 AM

A very sad tale, I never knew my father either, big jerk left my poor mum pregnant and alone at 18. Ah well...such is life. love Kristin