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Abandoning Youth

Your true dearest point when you harbored Dear dreams
And then you discover life’s not what it seems
Like abandoning hopes at an age Fresh and Young
Did you have an idea that it’ll last so long

For you left your dear home at only 18
And sent to Iraq at only 19 
And been left forever with permanent scars
Even though you shone through with your sweet talent bright

So why did you enter with a 4.0 GPA?
When the Scholarships showered you at a Multitudinous rate
So Bright you could Major in any Subject you wished
And still Financial Aid Mounds till your Graduate Degree

So what did you think of that Beautiful Voice?
If you entered in Youth at least College Choir was a choice
Now Stubborn Hard winds stole most of the Treasure
And the New,Mature Life Obliterated your Thoughts of Such Pleausure

So what did you think of the Vagabound Life?
While you prized poetry collection on the shelf gathered dust
One which some though very mature, others overly ideal
Therefore what crossed Your Mind when you Witnessed the Real?

Did the snobbish streak strike you in diverse circumstance?
Did you feel they were commoners and you better than best?
With the dear loving members holding Fancy Degrees
And did you look forward to the end of ordeal?

And while at boot camp did you attempt to contain
Your own disillusionment and a deep poignant stain
At that tender age did you still fight your tears?
All the while duty called you to conquer much greater fears
All this Strain and Attack plagued you with horrible Nightmares
Not to Mention it gave you the disorder of stress
Yet the terrors continued for seven long years 
For you definitely felt life to you wasn’t fair

Even though you gave Your all for hard won GI Bill
Did ever hold thoughts that this path’d be so Grim?
Though the dear teaching program greeted you with open arms
P’haps you had to abandon it due to Inner Snob
And continue life of horrors begun 
All this adversity gave you the outlook glum
And your Engulfing eyes look Perpetually lost 
The once Muscular Frame to a—Bare shadow gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/14/2014 6:38:00 AM
A fine Ode and congratulations on the fine winEuginia
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:28:00 PM
EUGINIA, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 11/25/2013 11:38:00 PM
Euginia, Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~
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