Abandoned House

Dusty shoes in empty hallway
Slanting sun through hanging doorway
Garden pathway gone to seed
Flowerbeds filled with weed

Dust motes playing through broken panes
Dirty rivulets from recent rains
Rusty streaks from leaky plumbing
Constant beat from droplets drumming

Shutters banging on hollow walls
Echoing sadly through empty halls
Tiles uplifted, cracked and broken
Deserted toy, forgotten token

Threadbare carpets torn and rotting
Cupboards bare with mildew spotting
Barren rooms, soiled and grimy
Dank and damp and somewhat slimy

Chipped enamel bathroom basin
Shattered mirror there to chasten
At anyone who stops to stare
At this old house in such despair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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January 19, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Wishing you would grace us with some new poetry soon. You are missed Marilyn. Love, Carol
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