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Abandoned

Last days of Autumn. A solitary goose flies Honking in despair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/17/2017 9:02:00 AM
So great and excellent. Three words underrating this magnificient piece which has dragged my mind in the viscose silk of awe to really lack what to say. A definite 7 friend.
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Date: 6/16/2017 8:36:00 AM
I have seen it happen, Rich. They fly over here a lot on their way farther south. However they do stop here and rest as we have loads of water. Nice haiku:)
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Rich Reitz
Date: 6/16/2017 4:32:00 PM
Was a single goose; no others around. He sounded panicked and extremely lonely. I could feel his pain. Been there myself.