Abandoned

Last days of Autumn.
A solitary goose flies
Honking in despair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Makama Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 9:02 AM
So great and excellent. Three words underrating this magnificient piece which has dragged my mind in the viscose silk of awe to really lack what to say. A definite 7 friend.
Turner Avatar
June 16, 2017 at 8:36 AM
I have seen it happen, Rich. They fly over here a lot on their way farther south. However they do stop here and rest as we have loads of water. Nice haiku:)
Reitz Avatar
June 16, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Was a single goose; no others around. He sounded panicked and extremely lonely. I could feel his pain. Been there myself.
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