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Abandoned

Dust
drifting
coating sills
forlorn floating
motes

lost
lonely
abandoned
the empty room
sighs




contest: TURN ON THE LANTERNE

Margaret Foster Sept. 2011

Copyright © Margaret Foster | Year Posted 2011

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March 22, 2025 at 1:02 PM

I very much enjoyed this. Congrats on your writing!

September 10, 2011 at 4:06 PM

Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

September 9, 2011 at 8:30 AM

WOnderful write!!! Congrats on your win!!!!!!!!----Lori

September 8, 2011 at 5:13 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 8, 2011 at 4:06 PM

Congrats Margaret on 4th place win with this awesome Lanterne my friend...luv.. honored to share place with u..

September 8, 2011 at 1:59 PM

Congratulations Marg on your 4th place win in Nette's contest.

September 8, 2011 at 10:51 AM

nicely done. Congratulations

September 8, 2011 at 8:45 AM

marge..congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 8, 2011 at 8:12 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest Margaret. Love, Carol

September 8, 2011 at 4:56 AM

Margaret congrats on your win..David

September 7, 2011 at 2:01 PM

Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed your poem..........George

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2011 at 9:24 PM

LOVE IT. gosh, I feel horrible, everyone is coming up with great imaginative things. And my time is running out..... the contest is almost over!!

September 6, 2011 at 4:21 PM

"The empty room sighs" is an outstanding combination of words. Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges. CR

September 6, 2011 at 10:30 AM

Very nice approach to the contest photo Marg;Best wishes.

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