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Dust drifting coating sills forlorn floating motes lost lonely abandoned the empty room sighs
contest: TURN ON THE LANTERNE Margaret Foster Sept. 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/22/2025 1:02:00 PM
I very much enjoyed this. Congrats on your writing!
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Date: 9/10/2011 4:06:00 PM
Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/9/2011 8:30:00 AM
WOnderful write!!! Congrats on your win!!!!!!!!----Lori
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Date: 9/8/2011 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Margaret
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:06:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on 4th place win with this awesome Lanterne my friend...luv.. honored to share place with u..
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations Marg on your 4th place win in Nette's contest.
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Date: 9/8/2011 10:51:00 AM
nicely done. Congratulations
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:45:00 AM
marge..congrats on your glowing win in my contest.. check the blog! …so proud of you..huggs!
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Turn On The Lanterne" contest Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:56:00 AM
Margaret congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 2:01:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, I enjoyed your poem..........George
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Date: 9/6/2011 9:24:00 PM
LOVE IT. gosh, I feel horrible, everyone is coming up with great imaginative things. And my time is running out..... the contest is almost over!!
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Date: 9/6/2011 4:21:00 PM
"The empty room sighs" is an outstanding combination of words. Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges. CR
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:30:00 AM
Very nice approach to the contest photo Marg;Best wishes.
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