A Youth's Plight

My eyes can see as
far as the shattered windows
can reflect, tick - tock
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 10, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Wow very deep, few words, heavy emotions. Nicely done
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January 10, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Thanks chris
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January 10, 2017 at 5:07 PM
Very powerful and profound for such a short poem. Excellent poem.
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January 10, 2017 at 5:12 PM
Thanks CHRISTY
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