A Young Sheep Wandered

A young sheep among a flock wandered
And as he looked around he pondered
The grass is much greener over there
I'll go yonder and not even have to share

Looking and thinking the shepherd was turned another way
The young sheep bolted and ran toward the field far away
As he ran, he thought with glee
I'm free I'm free I'm free

Upon reaching the field of green grass
The young sheep began to eat very fast
Without any cares and with unseeing eyes
He didn't notice as a pack of wolves ascended over the rise

As the wolves ran, drawing nearer to their prey
The young sheep looked up and saw them to his dismay
He started to run frantically, looking for the flock
And seeing no one, almost went into a state of shock

Running and looking frantically about
He saw by the fields edge; the woods; and let out a shout
I'll run into the woods, it will be safe
I'll get away from the wolves before it's too late

Without even giving it a second thought
The young sheep entered the woods, not finding the safety he sought
The light grew from bright to dim
He could barely see in front of him

Deeper into the woods he was engulfed into a fog
Then he stumbled and ran into a vast bog
Finally he stopped, barely able to stand
Not realizing he was in quicksand

As he listened for the wolves, he heard them howl
And distantly heard as they growled
Oh foolish sheep whose wandered astray
The bog will have you for it's meal today

A cold chill ran down his spine
As the young sheep tried to run to make up time
But he could not move, the quicksand held him fast
And as he sank, he knew his next breath would be his last

The last thing the sheep heard was the wolves as they laughed
Not even feeling the crook of the shepherd's staff
As he hooked it around the young sheep's neck
And pulled him from death's sandy wreck

With big, loving, and caring hands
The shepherd nourished the sheep to life again
The young sheep rejoined the flock he once had fled
Never forgetting without the shepherd, he would be dead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kelley Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:33 PM
Very nice! Enjoyed it!
Parnell Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Hi, I really enjoyed reading this poem(A Young Sheep Wondered). Very nice. Thank you!
Christensen Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 2:44 PM
Oh, this is great! I think it is very well done and the meanings hidden in this poem are so cleverly penned down with excellent ryhming.
Marie Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Wow..thanks for sharing!
Gadou Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:32 PM
wonderful message!
Stmichael Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Love the message behind this poem.
Platt Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 7:51 PM
I love the overall message of security from the shepherd, or God. We all stumble sometimes through life, but we need to feel protected. Well done.
Antony Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Amazing poem. Incredible write.
Sirak Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:50 AM
Wonderful write full of meaning. There is trouble everywhere and when we run from our shepherd, God, then we end up in a mess.
Lindley Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Quite a marvelous read . Out in the real world wolves wait up and around many bends. A wise man travels such perils with many armed men.. Great write my friend!
Christian Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 1:49 PM
love it, i have a poem about the lost sheep, God is the good shepherd who always looks after his sheep Amen, love this poem so much and thanks for your feed back on my work
Christian Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 1:48 PM
love it, i have a poem about the lost sheep, God is the good shepherd who always looks after his sheep Amen, love this poem so much and thanks for your feed back on my work
Thompson Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Oh, I really enjoyed this work of art. Every line and detail, painted the perfect picture. Thank you for sharing :) Keep up the awesome work.
Faith Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:27 AM
i'm free i'm free i'm free.. i love that. Thanks for your comment on my first poem.
Akter  Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 4:36 PM
interesting
Russell Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Wow! this is so touching and powerful. Remind me of the world running away from the Lord and in the end it is only he who can save us from the grip of satan.
A  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Hi JAMES, wondering if you'll be posting a new poem soon. thank you for the kind words, on my poem while I was gone..... SKAT
Herring Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 10:49 PM
This is perfectly written! I understand every word and I totally relate. This is truly inspiration at its best. LOVE this.
Milster Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 11:26 AM
Wow, that was really beautiful!
Hyler Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Thank you, the poem just flowed out of me like water when I accepted Jesus as my Lord and Savior at the age of 29.
Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Thanks for stopping by and welcome to soup.I hope that your stay will be long and many more post like this one..Sara
Gibson Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 11:22 AM
Welcome, James. Enjoyed this first poem of yours. Sounds like the parable in the Bible. Hope you will find many friends on this site to encourage you in your writing.
Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 11:19 AM
This one speaks of a strong faith in a loving and meriful God..I enjoyed reading it today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:53 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, James :) - I choose your first very well written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hyler Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Anne Lise Andresen Thank you :) The poem was written when I was 29 when I accepted Jesus Christ (The Good Shepherd) as my Lord and Savior. The poem flowed out of me like water. Thank you for commenting James :)
A  Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 3:28 PM
uplifting first poem, James , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Hyler Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Skat A Thank you :) The poem was written when I was 29 when I accepted Jesus Christ (The Good Shepherd) as my Lord and Savior. The poem flowed out of me like water. Thank you for commenting James :)
A   Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 12:49 PM
James, deep for a first poem.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Hyler Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Deborah Shiells Thank you :) The poem was written when I was 29 when I accepted Jesus Christ (The Good Shepherd) as my Lord and Savior. The poem flowed out of me like water. Thank you for commenting James :)
Hyler Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:52 AM
Poet Destroyer A Thank you :) The poem was written when I was 29 when I accepted Jesus Christ (The Good Shepherd) as my Lord and Savior. The poem flowed out of me like water. Thank you for commenting James :)
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