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A Yellow and Pink Sun


A yellow and pink sun smears and washes through

an unfinished hopscotch square

sing ~ Rain Rain Go Away ~

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Beata Agustin

April 24, 2024 at 12:54 AM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 9, 2016 at 2:01 AM

Michael,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

June 10, 2014 at 6:04 PM

this is such a little gem, Michael. Glad to find this one today.

Robert Lindley

June 8, 2014 at 8:02 AM

Never played hopscotch but did often play foursquare. A great entry in the contest my friend!!! I really like it's inspirational meaning.. BBBBravo!!!!!