A Year Ago In China

it was like a war zone


people killed all around


                                          one school completly torn down


                                                                                          
                                                                                            blood shed like leaves


children had no chance


                                         lives forever changed            



MOTHER NATURE IS IN CONTROL
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Let it out, my dear ... a mother must give birth to what is in her ... the liquid embrace of poesy.
Devonshire Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:34 PM
Mother nature can be wicked sometimes, Brandy, and you brought back images of the disaster in vivid form. Very nice!
Orozco Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Fancy style of write! I like it =). Nicely written too. - jeremiah
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