Hija De La Luna Poet Rhyme

A Writer's Two-Way Mirror

A writer’s two-way mirror

Unseen, I watched the live actor.
My eyes followed every gesture.
Speckled realities captured
My senses re-manufactured. 
Next time I will remain a mere spectator.  

hija de la luna
reflections of a florette
9/8/14

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Sara Kendrick September 19, 2014 at 2:51 PM Enjoyed reading your creative and unique work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Hija De La Luna September 19, 2014 at 8:56 PM thanks, Sara!

Maurice Yvonne September 8, 2014 at 7:27 PM Oh wow. This piece is inspired. Brilliant. Thank you. Hija De La Luna September 9, 2014 at 12:17 AM thanks for the "wow", Maurice!

Tim Smith September 7, 2014 at 12:52 PM Amazing write Hija...love it ...hugs Tim Hija De La Luna September 8, 2014 at 3:17 AM Thanks for loving it, Tim! hugs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty September 7, 2014 at 12:01 PM a rich poetic experience full of shades and nuances. "Two way mirror" is an impressive metaphor of poet's vision and re-vision - induced or intended. Deeply philosophical- Loved it. A major poem. Hugs! __________RAJAT Hija De La Luna September 8, 2014 at 3:16 AM Thank you, Rajat! was inspired as I was looking at a two-way mirror inside a psych laboratory :)) Thanks for the beautiful words you left on here! hugs