A Wreath On Dusk

How often I have watched the sun descending into dusk, and dusk, absorbing sun, exudes bright flavors for the eye. It's eye candy, often variegated, splendid in its hue. Those hues, dessert at end of day, sweeten with succulent delight. What delight in skies of mango, cantaloupe or marmalade, a marmalade of tangerine with raspberry mixed in! Sometimes in vanilla skies are Crème brûlée or honeyed gold; golden dollops of meringue above a lemon ball of sun. Other times, sun lies concealed by clouds in chocolate skies, or chocolate with the purple-gray of poi in cotton candy wisps of pink - pink or bright red cherry heavens, sometimes luscious plum - that plum reflected in blueberry seas; what treat in watching dusk!
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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Many congratulations on your win Utah lady xx
Brown Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "Wreath" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 2:32 AM
Excellent and beautiful piece,Andrea....Congratulations on your superb win...Kudos to you..Great write,lady..
Wright Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 8:34 PM
I love the fruit mentioned...thewhole poem is a winner. Congrats to you!!
Williams Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 1:50 AM
Andrea belated congrats on your win...David
May Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 5:28 PM
congrats on your win Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 1:46 PM
((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Poet Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 11:08 AM
Love it again!!A big congratulations on your win in the contest Andrea.Honoured to share the same spot with you.
Onclaud Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 9:02 AM
i could taste the flavors of your kind of dusk , andie, and feel the beauty of such night in every line.. what an amazing wreath!.. clap, clap to you for your honeyed win in my contest!.:) hugggs!
Grisetti Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations on yur creative wreath. i would like to try this form again.
Babcock Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Love the flavor of this wonderful poem Andrea. love phyl
Poet Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 2:39 AM
I came back and FAV this one!!
Bordner Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 8:37 PM
Tastey Andrea - I want to come over for desert! J.A.B.
Johnson Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 2:52 PM
You've opened my eyes to the sunsetting sky's with your delectable turning to nights. I had no idea there was such a sea of dimming the daily lights. I'm too busy watching all the reality botching. In the evening crap on tv. Which stands to reason in this time of season we should just go outside and see. Luck! :):)
Austin Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 9:27 AM
I just did a delightful drowning in your huge fruit bowl. Deeeelicious! Luck in the contest. daver
Devnath  Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 10:18 AM
From all spheres of the Sun's colour during the dusk beautifully pictured where eyes feel really alike. Loved the reading and wish you best in the contest. Always, bl
Grisetti Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 5:20 PM
i want some of that raspberry licorice. tasty wreath.
Horne Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 1:44 PM
wow, a tasty write here, my friend - a big winner for sure
Maverick Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Great contest entry Andrea, never tasted sky before.." ( best wishes )
Poet Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 10:11 AM
Revisiting this one ...almost 20 syllables in each line......it brings a slow rhythm while I read the poem.
Poet Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 4:54 AM
An awesome write here.....such a colorful poem...Love it!
Gasun Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 9:59 PM
A real fantastic write from a great poet like you, Andrea. I am sure this wins! I have enjoyed reading it. Good luck always!
Mac Donald Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Well...YUM!:) A great sensory write, Andrea. Love the bright and colourful imagery. Thanks for the comment, I didn't use a translator, but I'm thinking I've made a couple of errors.:( Best wishes, and lots of fun with that contest!! love, Mikki
Mjelde Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 3:49 PM
this was awesome Andrea, like it!! good luck in the contest..Hugs Laila
May Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 2:11 PM
great write Andrea......love ...Joseph.
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