A World View

Apathy can ease in unnoticed over time
 as the world evolves in poorly reverenced predilections
by encompassed unearthliness of the unseen and divine
 while in the shadows, hidden consternation holds restrictions
all humanity submerged beneath the loss of the wonder of creation
 to find only hate and inner self condemnation
but love is slowly rising to restore hope and godly benediction.
 



7 words
7 lines
11-16-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, DM.
Barden Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 1:12 AM
Big congrats on your win in Lu Loo's contest, DM - keep writing, my friend! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :-)
Roper Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 1:13 PM
DM, nicely done, congratulations on your win,,
Rose  Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Congrats on your win, Nicely placed words.
Scars Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 7:35 AM
this is so true DM. great poem really enjoyed every word. Thank you and congratulations on your placement. Hugs...:)-luloo
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