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A World Unseen

Peace is everlasting Violence forgotten A world in harmony a wish We have all wished But no one answers that's right Human nature is our world Our Goverment If not nature What explains our equal flaws Stupidity? Ignorance? What? We do We shape history We really do But we create hell warzones fighting Violence We can rid ourselves Rid ourselves of mistakes start over cleanse ourselves Here we are dreaming AGAIN We can't change never unless forced to see too see better

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Skat A

Date: 10/7/2016 11:50:00 PM

Noah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Noah Velazquez
Date: 10/11/2016 6:49:00 AM

Thank You,I have over 20 in my notebook but am afraid of which to put up

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/7/2016 8:19:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2016 2:10:00 PM

Noah, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Noah Velazquez
Date: 10/7/2016 6:19:00 AM

Thank You,I will read and comment