A World of Window Pain

A World of Window Pain

dedicated to, Ingrid Showalter Swift, friend, fellow soup poet, 
who has coined the title and given rise to my poem.


Oh so sad
Eyes cast down
Window dressing
Of my frown.
  
Oh I’m an artist 
A designer of woe
Angst conceived to
Garner a glow

Thick is the gravy of my sorrow.   
Don’t be lured onto my ladle
Sometimes I just need to
Rock my cradle. 

© August 1, 2002
Kathryn McL. Collins


P.S.
Out of the cobwebs
I come dear Ingrid.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 3:52 PM
A poem only you could have written. Excellent structure... the rhyming and flow are to die for! Well Done You! Love Keith
Kilmer Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Kathryn, This is strikingly sad. It really hits home. God bless Ingrid. Don't get in hurry to see her. We need you here to keep us honest. ~Kilmer
Pritts Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 1:41 AM
Well done Kathryn. This poem has been an inspiration to me in several ways. But I'll have to soup mail you about that.
Collins Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 7:17 AM
Thanks Ingrid - first poem read of yours was about a mother goose and her goslings.
Showalter Swift Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 2:02 PM
LOL Thank you AGAIN...and again I love most "Rock my Cradle"
Mohammed Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Excellent work Kathy. Well conceived, I thoroughly enjoyed perusing this one from you. Regards....Mustapha
Collins Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Thanks so much Mustapha for your encouragement Kathy
Watson Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 2:12 PM
Thick is the gravy of your sorrow. Heavy are the tears that fill the eyes of your reader. Brilliant poem Kathy.
Collins Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Thank you Darren - I really don't know how that gravy thing came to mind. love, Kathy
O'Leary Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 12:22 PM
Another 'saddie', Kathy...maybe I'll try 1 2 (one too)... just an idle threat...anyway, a good 'saddie'... love, Terry
Collins Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Terry your threats don't frighten me. xxx ooo's kathy
Mason Gibbs Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 8:44 AM
what an awesome poem, although its sad I enjoyed reading it.
Collins Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Thank you, Gwen. I feel most comfortable writing sad poems. kathy
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