A World Away
An ocean away doesn't seem
like much...I hear technology
even can replace our
touch...give you a feeling they
are always there...see every
new style of their hair...all
these things can be true...one
must remember it takes
two...for even with the
advances that we have
made...we still can't make
someone want to wave...the
same old story will always
persist...one gets neglected and
will cut their wrist...only a
metaphor to ponder y'all...we
need two people to prevent the
fall...
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