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A World Away

An ocean away doesn't seem like much...I hear technology even can replace our touch...give you a feeling they are always there...see every new style of their hair...all these things can be true...one must remember it takes two...for even with the advances that we have made...we still can't make someone want to wave...the same old story will always persist...one gets neglected and will cut their wrist...only a metaphor to ponder y'all...we need two people to prevent the fall...

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