Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written - 3rd September 2023

 

 

A Wondrous Gift

One may not possess garden space
dwelling in a compacted place
But there’s something all can embrace
that’s the sky in glorious grace.

Look at clouds as they’re drifting by
painting their pictures way up high
Thrill to dance of birds on the wing
hark their melodic twittering.

There’s beauty in the rising sun
or sunset as the night’s begun
So do not fret o’er what was missed
for the sky is a wondrous gift.

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Sotto Poet September 10, 2023 at 6:06 PM Belle, your poem is an absolute treasure trove of beauty. Every word flows effortlessly, creating a symphony of emotions. The imagery you have woven is so exquisitely vivid, it feels like stepping into a vibrant painting. The rhymes in your poem are like sparkling jewels, adding an extra layer of enchantment. Overall, your work is a stunning masterpiece that captivates the senses and leaves the reader in awe. Beryl Edmonds September 10, 2023 at 6:26 PM Thank you Sotto for your generous kind words, comments like yours inspire one to keep writing on… Belle

John Read September 3, 2023 at 10:20 AM Nature has so many gifts enjoyed your poem sister Beryl. Beryl Edmonds September 3, 2023 at 3:43 PM Yes nature has many gifts for us to enjoy. Thank you brother John… Sis Belle

Paula Goldsmith September 3, 2023 at 10:18 AM A beautiful write/picture. Beauty is everywhere if we will look for it. Have a blessed/great ~ day/week.............. Beryl Edmonds September 3, 2023 at 3:41 PM Thank you Paula, yes beauty is everywhere if we look around, nature is a wonderful thing. Have a lovely week. Blessings, Belle

Jennifer Proxenos September 3, 2023 at 9:52 AM Belle you also had purple hair, life is short, be happy, besides it suits you. As for your poem the sky is the limit one says but so wrong the sky stretches into darkness and eternity beyond the atmosphere of Earth when one goes up in a space ship so we should enjoy the blue sky and clouds above us as they hold eternal hope and the sky, how right you are is a wondrous gift to Mankind. Blessings dear friend, JENNIFER. Beryl Edmonds September 3, 2023 at 3:38 PM Blessings to you too dear friend, yes I have violet highlights in my hair same as you, it suits you too. The poem came from the fact that I can’t see the sunsets from my window, we’re facing the wrong way, it grieves me as I love sunsets. I never thought about it till we moved and found out. It’s just one of those things…. Belle

Silent One September 3, 2023 at 8:36 AM Yes you are right there is a beauty there, such a magnificent sight it can be and spreading so much colour and warmth.. lovely poem dear. Beryl Edmonds September 3, 2023 at 9:23 AM Thank you Silent One… Blessings, Belle

Ink Empress September 3, 2023 at 6:20 AM Sky i too agree is a wondrous sight, canvas of light i truly love, I especially love sunsets, and aftermath of sunsets the colours always leave me in awe every single time like its all a new experience. I love your beautiful rhymes here. And the imagery and depth of your lines. Profound write Beryl Edmonds September 3, 2023 at 7:56 AM Thank you so much Ink Empress, your lovely kind words have made my day. Bless you, Belle