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A Wondrous Gift

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Written - 3rd September 2023

One may not possess garden space dwelling in a compacted place But there’s something all can embrace that’s the sky in glorious grace. Look at clouds as they’re drifting by painting their pictures way up high Thrill to dance of birds on the wing hark their melodic twittering. There’s beauty in the rising sun or sunset as the night’s begun So do not fret o’er what was missed for the sky is a wondrous gift.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/10/2023 6:06:00 PM

Belle, your poem is an absolute treasure trove of beauty. Every word flows effortlessly, creating a symphony of emotions. The imagery you have woven is so exquisitely vivid, it feels like stepping into a vibrant painting. The rhymes in your poem are like sparkling jewels, adding an extra layer of enchantment. Overall, your work is a stunning masterpiece that captivates the senses and leaves the reader in awe.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/10/2023 6:26:00 PM

Thank you Sotto for your generous kind words, comments like yours inspire one to keep writing on… Belle

John Read

Date: 9/3/2023 10:20:00 AM

Nature has so many gifts enjoyed your poem sister Beryl.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/3/2023 3:43:00 PM

Yes nature has many gifts for us to enjoy. Thank you brother John… Sis Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/3/2023 10:18:00 AM

A beautiful write/picture. Beauty is everywhere if we will look for it. Have a blessed/great ~ day/week..............

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/3/2023 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Paula, yes beauty is everywhere if we look around, nature is a wonderful thing. Have a lovely week. Blessings, Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/3/2023 9:52:00 AM

Belle you also had purple hair, life is short, be happy, besides it suits you. As for your poem the sky is the limit one says but so wrong the sky stretches into darkness and eternity beyond the atmosphere of Earth when one goes up in a space ship so we should enjoy the blue sky and clouds above us as they hold eternal hope and the sky, how right you are is a wondrous gift to Mankind. Blessings dear friend, JENNIFER.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/3/2023 3:38:00 PM

Blessings to you too dear friend, yes I have violet highlights in my hair same as you, it suits you too. The poem came from the fact that I can’t see the sunsets from my window, we’re facing the wrong way, it grieves me as I love sunsets. I never thought about it till we moved and found out. It’s just one of those things…. Belle

Silent One

Date: 9/3/2023 8:36:00 AM

Yes you are right there is a beauty there, such a magnificent sight it can be and spreading so much colour and warmth.. lovely poem dear.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/3/2023 9:23:00 AM

Thank you Silent One… Blessings, Belle

Ink Empress

Date: 9/3/2023 6:20:00 AM

Sky i too agree is a wondrous sight, canvas of light i truly love, I especially love sunsets, and aftermath of sunsets the colours always leave me in awe every single time like its all a new experience. I love your beautiful rhymes here. And the imagery and depth of your lines. Profound write

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/3/2023 7:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Ink Empress, your lovely kind words have made my day. Bless you, Belle