A Woman Scorned

Later she would look back and see
the cracks that were now obvious.
How blind she once had been
in the throngs of her passion.

Twenty years of his affairs
his lies, and his betrayal.
Yet it was only by chance
that she had found out.

Out for lunch one day
she saw him at the back,
with a lovely young woman.
He was engrossed in her.

Their body language intense
she could see the hot flames.
Following when they left
she saw them enter the hotel.

Sicken to her very core
she went home and paced.
Then set his clothes on fire
gleefully watching them burn.

When he saw the flames
he knew the game was up.
He raced to try to save things
Yelling out you crazy *****.

Then a loud screech of tires
he drove off rubber burning.
As for her, the flush of triumph
soon faded leaving her drained.

The divorce was acrimonious
the final judgement in her favour.
He now learned the hard lesson 
never cross or scorn a woman.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/28/2015 2:47:00 AM
All sentiments nicely dished out.
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:58:00 PM
The truth always comes out! Excellent write my dear. Hugs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/6/2015 8:54:00 PM
ty Cecilia hugs
Date: 7/30/2015 12:58:00 PM
A pain many a woman has felt, great write! ~lee
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/5/2015 5:01:00 PM
ty Lee hugs
Date: 7/30/2015 12:23:00 PM
This a beautiful narrative written with a bold measure of clarity and honesty.
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Date: 8/5/2015 5:00:00 PM
ty Ndaba hugs
Date: 7/30/2015 8:19:00 AM
Wow! Fantastic!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/30/2015 9:04:00 AM
it was inspired by Paul Tovey he suggested that I had a poem in one of the lines of Do you really know him. ty Rick hugs
Date: 7/30/2015 7:18:00 AM
Awesome classic. Anyone can learn a lesson or two here, Shadow. hugs! PS. Not for cotest?
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Date: 7/30/2015 9:05:00 AM
not currently Kim ty hugs
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