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This is dedicated to all the lovers of Big Band music.  How about a little romance?

~Oblivion Dark Sunshine - Poetry Diva - Verlena S. Walker~

A WOMAN’S STYLE
Why, oh, why am I transmogrified with desire when I see you in society? Is it right to control me when I just want to be free? Love, my dear, is never to be denied. I just want to feel your essence your vibes. Call it what you may but I am not just a roll in the hay a simple lay. We will get to know each other's endeavors this day. A woman’s style is to go after what she desires and throw it to the wind. She will get her man and that’s the win. Today I will walk in the sunrise. You are the rogue in my mind’s eye. I smile because you are a burst of sunshine. I just want to feel your energy with mine. I’ll come again tomorrow and you will give me a wink. Soon I know I will be your everything. A woman’s style is to be shy for the moment. She will converse once she knows you are lonely. Tonight I will venture into the twilight. You'll be at that particular place in time. I will enter the dance hall impromptu. You will glance my way and i'll be looking at you. I figure this will be the big break. Must I close my eyes to crave? A woman’s style is to romantically embrace her desires and her anticipations. She knows the signs of procrastination. A woman’s style is to follow her aspirations. She might find a better placement. So do not be egoistic. A woman’s style is altruistic. [A woman's style!] [A woman's style!] [A woman's style!]
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Verlena S. Walker Penned on September 21, 2014!

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Date: 10/5/2014 12:35:00 AM
A woman's style, ambuscade the male with delicate smile, meanwhile stoutly seizing his will and destroying silly denial, for he is hers along love's mile. You are makin me rhyme tonight Verlena! Women are inclined to nuture, and also to gain the gold of love. I appreciate the indrpendnce and repulsion to hesitancy that you correctly ascribe to the Female spirit. Love how you set your scenes, and the use of egoistic/altruistic is brilliant Verlena...J.A.B.
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Date: 10/5/2014 5:49:00 PM
Super-awesome comment you have given me Justin. This is a future Big Band hit. I love his body but not the ego that can come from my fetish. Superlative you are in your response to this piece. Thanks again a heap. Sending a smile, Verlena.
Date: 9/21/2014 11:06:00 AM
Wow this is so true n beautifully said so Verlena! Loved Richard's comments below! Let a woman live her original!
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Upma for your superlative response. Verlena
Date: 9/21/2014 9:17:00 AM
Verlena, those were the women we were always afraid to ask to dance. Those women of style, of substance, poise. Great write and an extra 500 points for using "transmogrified" in a sentence.
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:06:00 PM
Thanks John for you super-awesome response. Verlena
Date: 9/21/2014 8:23:00 AM
I enjoyed this glimpse at womanhood. With my wife the best gift I have offered is accepting who she is and not trying to change her into my preconception of womanhood. Over the years she has changed in many ways and I have seen her become the fullfillment of herself. It has been a wondorous journey. I enjoyed your poem very much.
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:08:00 PM
Thanks Richard for your superlative and super-awesome response. May more happiness come to you and your significant other.... Verlena
Date: 9/21/2014 3:53:00 AM
I love the repeated lines in this deep romantic poem Verlena - oh how I would love to hear someone sing the word 'transmogrified' in a lyric LOL :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2014 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Jan for this super-awesome remark and superlative response. May I will get promoted via the Soup? LOL Sending a smile, Verlena...
Date: 9/21/2014 1:49:00 AM
A wonderful and deeply psychological and romantic poem coming out of the heart of a real woman! Have much enjoyed it my dear friend, Verlena! Excellent!
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Date: 9/21/2014 1:55:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios for your super-awesome remarks. Verlena