A Woman Not a Girl

On this earthly plane I've come to be
an older woman,not a girl.
But in my dancing reverie
bend me over and watch me twirl!

For there came a time inside my life
I could only see the years pass by.
Realization cut like a knife;
I spent my days upon a sigh.

Then I put away my childish things;
one moment and they were gone.
I learned even the caged bird sings
when breathing in the newborn dawn.

Never a shrinking violet here
on the stage of my own history.
I'll keep going for now it's clear
life's really not such a mystery.


So I'll rock on into the night
when joy appears,give it a whirl.
Turn all the darkness into light
for I'm a woman,not a girl!


By Deb Wilson
for contest"Coming Of Age"
sponsored by Frank Herrera
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 3/2/2012 9:19:00 PM
DEB... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:42:00 AM
congrats on some superb poetry....~sashi
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:44:00 PM
So true, so true [just remember to say hi to the little girl still inside of you once in awhile!] Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:10:00 PM
nice poem! congrats on the contest win!
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Date: 2/27/2012 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations in the"Coming Of Age" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 9:33:00 AM
cxongrats Deb on an excellent win for this magnificent write .. great title luv..
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Date: 2/25/2012 7:35:00 PM
Good piece.
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:14:00 PM
I am enjoying reading some very diverse poetry today. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:06:00 AM
Keep going....have joy and rock into the night Deb.When you getting old you can sit in yours rocking chair. Luck in the contest!- oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/23/2012 1:29:00 AM
Deb. I had to read this twice before I knew what it meant. Then It came to me. There's nothing like plunging your raft into the unknown waters and riding the torrent of waves. Then resting on the shore of the placid waters when it's over, and reflecting on the wild ride. Keep on rocking into the night. Rockman :-)
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Date: 2/23/2012 8:32:00 AM
Smile ˜ How You Doing kong? Smile, you Make Me Laugh. ˜ John!:) *
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