A Woman Not a Girl

On this earthly plane I've come to be
an older woman,not a girl.
But in my dancing reverie
bend me over and watch me twirl!

For there came a time inside my life
I could only see the years pass by.
Realization cut like a knife;
I spent my days upon a sigh.

Then I put away my childish things;
one moment and they were gone.
I learned even the caged bird sings
when breathing in the newborn dawn.

Never a shrinking violet here
on the stage of my own history.
I'll keep going for now it's clear
life's really not such a mystery.


So I'll rock on into the night
when joy appears,give it a whirl.
Turn all the darkness into light
for I'm a woman,not a girl!


By Deb Wilson
for contest"Coming Of Age"
sponsored by Frank Herrera
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 2, 2012 at 9:19 PM
DEB... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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February 29, 2012 at 3:42 AM
congrats on some superb poetry....~sashi
Guzzi Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:44 PM
So true, so true [just remember to say hi to the little girl still inside of you once in awhile!] Congrad's Light & Love
Bauer Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:10 PM
nice poem! congrats on the contest win!
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations in the"Coming Of Age" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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February 27, 2012 at 9:33 AM
cxongrats Deb on an excellent win for this magnificent write .. great title luv..
Smith Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 7:35 PM
Good piece.
Brown Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 12:14 PM
I am enjoying reading some very diverse poetry today. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Deb. Love, Carol
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February 23, 2012 at 2:06 AM
Keep going....have joy and rock into the night Deb.When you getting old you can sit in yours rocking chair. Luck in the contest!- oxox love Anne-Lise
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February 23, 2012 at 1:29 AM
Deb. I had to read this twice before I knew what it meant. Then It came to me. There's nothing like plunging your raft into the unknown waters and riding the torrent of waves. Then resting on the shore of the placid waters when it's over, and reflecting on the wild ride. Keep on rocking into the night. Rockman :-)
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February 23, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Smile ˜ How You Doing kong? Smile, you Make Me Laugh. ˜ John!:) *
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