A Wish On the Moon

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She rests her feet on crescent moon, the shadow of a pearl, in June, distant sky in lapis hewn, her ivory starlight wishes strewn.

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Jacqueline Elston

Date: 10/29/2017 5:11:00 AM

l love this. l want to be her. kind regards.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/29/2017 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, Jackie!

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/28/2017 1:07:00 PM

Gosh I would love to have the moon as a foot rest such luxury. Your poem is the stuff dreams are made of I love it.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/28/2017 1:28:00 PM

Thanks, Patricia!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/27/2017 8:10:00 PM

Such gorgeous imagery and rhyme. Superb and enjoyed!

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/28/2017 8:00:00 AM

Thanks, Susan.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/27/2017 2:37:00 PM

what a charming rhyme and I love the picture too Dale:-) hugs jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/27/2017 3:40:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!