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A Wish On the Moon

She rests her feet on crescent moon,
the shadow of a pearl, in June,
distant sky in lapis hewn,
her ivory starlight wishes strewn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Gosh I would love to have the moon as a foot rest such luxury. Your poem is the stuff dreams are made of I love it.
Cozart Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 1:28 PM
Thanks, Patricia!
Ashley Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Such gorgeous imagery and rhyme. Superb and enjoyed!
Cozart Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Allison Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 2:37 PM
what a charming rhyme and I love the picture too Dale:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Thanks, Jan!
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