A Wish In the Rain

Stood in the Rain 
And felt it wash away the tears.
Closed my eyes 
And pictured you here.

Holding me close 
and not letting go
I need you now
more than you will ever know.

So I opened my eyes,
In my mind praying this wish comes true.
Cause I'm standing in the rain
And waiting right here for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 8:34 AM
A beautiful write. Surely fate will send a blessing.. BBBRAVO!!!!!
Maharaj Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 8:51 AM
aahh many Thanks Rob :)
Anglesey Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Sweet and romantic. The rain washing away the tears as you wait. Nice imagery :)
Maharaj Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 8:50 AM
Thank You Karen
Tacito Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Here's to the arrival of your sunrise...
Maharaj Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 2:53 AM
Arr i await that
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