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David De La Croes

A Wish For Summer

Ah! If I could walk once again with you through the hazy pine-scented forest
and feel the trembling of your being as I your body with soft kisses caress...

Copyright © David De La Croes | Year Posted 2013

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Suzanne Delaney

June 18, 2013 at 12:33 PM

Back again David: Maybe it is my interpretation but I was looking for a verb between I and 'your body'. Or perhaps that is for me to imagine......SuZ

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 15, 2013 at 2:17 PM

- It's a beautiful summer couplet, David! - Hope you will win the contest, good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes

June 18, 2013 at 12:23 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your encouragement... David

Suzanne Delaney

June 14, 2013 at 11:06 AM

Love your couplet David. Re-read once more...have you left a word behind there in the forest. SuZ

David De La Croes

June 14, 2013 at 1:19 PM

Thanks, Suz. I must admit that the words I used may be misread, so I have changed it... Cheers, David

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