Darren White Poet Rhyme

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A Wish

A WISH

He holds out both his hands
eyes closed, and aimed up high
a wish escapes, it flies
and on a star it lands
that wishes it could give
the means and will to live

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© Darren White
November 2, 2017

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Naderia Bookram March 14, 2018 at 8:19 PM beautiful well expressed keep up the good work

Jieranai Maier November 20, 2017 at 1:49 AM Very touching and it invokes such deep emotional feelings.

Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2017 at 9:09 AM Wonderfully expressed!

Sara Ella November 2, 2017 at 9:37 PM A beautiful poem <3 Darren <3 Hoping wishes come true <3

Agnes Krampe November 2, 2017 at 1:32 PM Lovely image, Darren.

Probir Gupta November 2, 2017 at 10:52 AM Beautiful ...

Tim Smith November 2, 2017 at 10:08 AM Your wish will be answered

Mike Gentile November 2, 2017 at 9:41 AM A Beautiful Poem, Darren and a beautiful wish. I believe in wishes !

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 2, 2017 at 8:42 AM Deeper than the light words, expertly crafted, a living pen. Much love to you sweet poet, Bless xomo

Vijay Pandit November 2, 2017 at 6:46 AM A magnificent write, Darren--so well done!