A Wish

To Cherish You do not need riches Nor grow inches It must all come from within True love and a few smiles Just working with your heart Somewhere new Everything is not so perfect Me not reaching there yet That’s when you came in A few steps turned into walking, Flying now I’m soaring It’s time to discover

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2013 10:03:00 PM

Asantewa, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA

Marvin D. Schrebe

Date: 3/31/2013 6:43:00 PM

I agree with Anne. You write very well. I enjoyed reading this one . Keep writing. MarvinthePoet

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2013 3:12:00 AM

Asantewa, you write very well - you've posted several good poems. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Read and write your comment at other "poets' poems and you will get back. - (Give to get) - We are many in this "family" always nice with even more members. - Wishing you a lovely Easter! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)