A Winters Walk

A winter’s walk may sound cold and unexciting.
Would you believe it can be so warm and inviting?
Indeed the beauty that is seen can warm you inside.
Not just the bright scene of snow, bringing pride.
Take the fresh smells that surround season’s glory.
Each step that you take brings forward a story.
Remembering childhood play, snowball fights you won.
Sled riding with friends to see who could be number one,
When your spirit and mind recalls adventures of past,
Angels shall fly overhead and fulfill your soul fast.
Let’s bundle ourselves go for a walk along this lane.
Knowing sweet hot cocoa waits, within our domain.


written for
Sponsor Francine Roberts 
Contest Name A Winter Couplet  


my choice topic
2)a winter's walk
form
  Couplet--- Acrostic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/24/2011 10:50:00 PM
second line Cecil, is it missing the word "be" . thanks for entering my contest
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Cecil Hickman
Date: 11/25/2011 10:09:00 AM
yes you are right it should have had the word "be" which changed it also to a question, this just proves grammer and spelling checkers are not always correct,,Thank you for pointing that out to me,,,Blessings..Cecil
Date: 11/24/2011 5:26:00 PM
snow can cover a multitute of sin. john
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