Kim Rodrigues Poet Triolet

A Winters Hug

First breeze of Spring — a Winter’s hug.
Refreshed I walk on cobblestones,
Before the march of pesky bugs.

First breeze of Spring — a Winter’s hug.
A smile percolates on chill mug.

The mind of Shakespeare warms my bones.
Refreshed I walk on cobblestones.
First breeze of Spring — a Winter’s hug.

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Tom Cunningham March 23, 2018 at 12:50 PM Lovely verse Kim. Good luck. Tom Kim Rodrigues March 23, 2018 at 3:32 PM Thanks, Tom!

Line Gauthier March 23, 2018 at 8:40 AM Charming triolet, Kim. Beautifully done. Kim Rodrigues March 23, 2018 at 8:47 AM Thank you!

Cheryl Hoffman March 22, 2018 at 9:42 PM An awesome nature write Kim; great rhyme! Good luck in the contest!~Che :) Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2018 at 9:53 PM Thanks, Che!

Mick Talbot March 22, 2018 at 8:28 PM Love it, the last line, aint that the truth... Mick Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2018 at 8:30 PM For sure! Thanks, Mick!

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2018 at 7:54 PM This is so nice, Kim. Love a GOOD trolet, any ol' day! Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2018 at 7:55 PM Thanks, Andrea! I needed to flex some refrain muscles :)

Vijay Pandit March 22, 2018 at 6:49 PM A delightful poem, Kim..enjoyed reading it.. beautiful flow and rhythm! Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2018 at 7:02 PM Thanks so much, Vijay!

Chris Green March 22, 2018 at 6:45 PM Beautifully written Kim. I have missed reading your work. Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2018 at 6:48 PM Thanks so much, Chris! I miss you too!