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A Winters Hug

First breeze of Spring — a Winter’s hug. Refreshed I walk on cobblestones, Before the march of pesky bugs. First breeze of Spring — a Winter’s hug. A smile percolates on chill mug. The mind of Shakespeare warms my bones. Refreshed I walk on cobblestones. First breeze of Spring — a Winter’s hug.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/23/2018 12:50:00 PM
Lovely verse Kim. Good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2018 3:32:00 PM
Thanks, Tom!
Date: 3/23/2018 8:40:00 AM
Charming triolet, Kim. Beautifully done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/22/2018 9:42:00 PM
An awesome nature write Kim; great rhyme! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2018 9:53:00 PM
Thanks, Che!
Date: 3/22/2018 8:28:00 PM
Love it, the last line, aint that the truth... Mick
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2018 8:30:00 PM
For sure! Thanks, Mick!
Date: 3/22/2018 7:54:00 PM
This is so nice, Kim. Love a GOOD trolet, any ol' day!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I needed to flex some refrain muscles :)
Date: 3/22/2018 6:49:00 PM
A delightful poem, Kim..enjoyed reading it.. beautiful flow and rhythm!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay!
Date: 3/22/2018 6:45:00 PM
Beautifully written Kim. I have missed reading your work.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/22/2018 6:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chris! I miss you too!

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