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A Winter Tease

Snowflakes soft as a Kentucky breeze Floating down gently in the frigid air Settling on the barren limbs of trees, White brush strokes on a winter frieze A whisp of snow, an old winter tease Reminding us of our ski gear to prepare Snowflakes soft as a Kentucky breeze Floating down gently in the frigid air. Written November 18, 2022

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 11/20/2022 6:13:00 PM

Small correction needed and that is your spelling of "Freeze" on the last line. You have put an I in that word. Other than that I have had my free sample of winter and I wish to exchange it for summer or at least jacket weather would be better than this.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/20/2022 7:06:00 PM

Thanks, Miranda, but I did mean "frieze." You might want to look up the word, and you will see how it fits the line. I do appreciate your read and your comment.