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A Winter Night's Poem

Sitting by a fire on a winter night – longing to see daylight – shivering, freezing, in the icy cold – how long can my patience hold? “We’ll be all fine,” Father had assured – just days before his absence we endured. Mother had consoled me through rivers of tears – hours before we’d face our fears – Cruel murderers, they blasted the streets – riding grandly on their war tank fleets – people dropping still by the second – but I didn’t budge, even as Death beckoned. Captivity chained me, dragged me along – tell me, killers, what was my wrong? Is it that I live in the land that you hate? Why, why is this my fate? Sitting by a raging fire on a chilly night – wondering how long I’ll face this plight – will this dark dusk ever cease? Will I, someday, witness dawn and peace?

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Date: 1/19/2025 7:47:00 AM
Dear Stasya, your expressive poem is as potent as it is poignant, especially as this plight is expressed through the perspective of a child in wartime. A vivid, soulful piece that reaches deeply inside the reader's psyche and brings the cruel face of war and death into intimate focus. Impactful poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Stasya Volkova
Date: 1/22/2025 5:29:00 AM
That means a lot to me! This is partly inspired by the child victims of the ongoing wars in Gaza and Ukraine. Thank you for your wishes!

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