A Winter Image

old house groaning
          spirits in winds howling
          moaning door creaking



             January 17, 2020
        
               9:00a.m PST
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Neumann Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 8:31 AM
And then the wolves kept roaming ...
Romios Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Kai...you are very imaginative. Thank you... Panagiota xx
Messina Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 8:42 PM
I didn't know you had 30 degree weather in Ca. (lol) Great haiku, Panagiota There are voices in those howling winds...and I know just how they sound. Charlie xx
Romios Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 10:25 PM
Howdy Charles! Meant to tell you how I love your photo. So unique and good looking you are! I am in Northern CA, we get the cold winds from the foothills. Tahoe had an avalanche today. Days are in the 50s and up this time of year, nights 30. Still warmer than the Midwest! No shoveling in my city, love it.always feel free to correct me)) Blind as a Bat~ Panagiota xx
Sands Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 2:10 PM
I know exactly what howling wind can be like outside, as you describe. Well done Panagiota :)
Romios Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 7:35 PM
When I was a little girl, we lived in a big, big house. It was new, but when the wind howled, the house was a noise pit. And being alone in a big house made my hair stand on end. Panagiota
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January 17, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Love the image Panagiota, I could hear the howling wind and the creaking of the door. Tom
Romios Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Good morning, Tom! It was kind of that way last night. Eeeks. You are an angel for commenting. Your halo is glowing in the universe! Blessings~ Panagiota xx
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